Link to article: https://www.wsj.com/lifestyle/workplace/sweden-has-a-caffeinated-secret-to-happiness-at-work-ea938950?mod=workplace_news_article_pos1

Successfully engaging writing

• Good job of transitioning the core subject from one geographic location to another (Sweden→US) in the introductory paragraphs 
• Effective choices of quotes from sources (The Grand’s co-founder who uses fika–has experience; professor of well-being welfare and happiness at the Stockholm School of Economics who is educated on fika)

What doesn’t work so well

• The amount of different sources (10) is overwhelming 
• Could also have discussed more in-depth about what the process of fika entails, not just its effects